zirtv
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Post by zirtv on Mar 11, 2014 15:39:54 GMT
Name: Nick IGN: Zirtv Age:14 How Long have you been on the server: I have been playing around a week our so and I have came to enjoy your server a lot and I was on the forms and said hey why not apply for gym so I am. What Position your looking for: gym leader ( any if I get accepted you can pick ) Why do you want to help:(Use Lots of info, It helps us learn who you are) I want to help because I am loving your server and thinking about donating 500$ cuz im bored. Also I want to help because I think it would be awesome to be a gym leader. I don't know other than that I would just love to be a gym leader hope you accept me bye Extra Notes: I like to eat chicken wing :/
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Post by Nathan on Mar 11, 2014 17:46:16 GMT
Hello Nick, Thanks for applying for this role. I've looked over your application and found it very insufficient , I'd like you to update some of the information you've given us, Why you want to help us: Considering donating $500 , Doesn't make you legible to become a higher rank just because of that fact, There's a big difference from a donater to a trusted role within the Craftbros community ,Also I'd like something that makes you stand out more then the other people applying for the same positions as you, As we've had more then 50 application in the time the server has been up, Why should craftbros select you... Please re-inverse your words, And longer your sentences. The information needs to be edited.
Plus we try and hold a professional community when it comes to trusted staff such as gym leaders, Your extra notes: "I like to eat chicken wings" may be humorous to you, But seems rather childish , please also update this. Or completely remove it. maybe then you'll hold a chance become a gym leader.
Also i'm requesting that you try and build a bigger relationship with the community and get more popular as you've been only playing for roughly a week i'd like to see people nominate you for a gym leader position, things you can do to build relations is: youtube videos, talking more, offering help/services.
- Nathan
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